Breathing Water
Still, skipping through the waters
of my subconscious
like a stone.
The pain intensifies
as does the ecstasy,
and I am drowning-
and I am breathing
for the first time.
Pray, wake me from this
beautiful nightmare.
Please, leave me to dream.
3 Comments
Vall.Grey poetry
Again you remind me of my poems…
“Take me somewhere
I don’t feel
Take me somewhere
to feel the feeling of escape”
Your writing is so beautiful. Good work <3
boudika
Perfect timing! I haven’t been writing recently because I have been really down, just came back to the site today and this beautiful comment was waiting to encourage me to get back into it, so thank you! ??
Vall.Grey poetry
Thank you for giving me the pleasure to read your beautiful work. I too am struggling the past many months, and sadly I don’t write so much, I reform some of my old poems. Anyway, I wish you the best, and keep in mind that you are not alone, I mean it. I try to say the same thing to myself too. haha