Still, skipping through the waters
of my subconscious
like a stone.
The pain intensifies
as does the ecstasy,
and I am drowning-
and I am breathing
for the first time.
Pray, wake me from this
beautiful nightmare.
Please, leave me to dream.
Breathing Water
Again you remind me of my poems…
“Take me somewhere
I don’t feel
Take me somewhere
to feel the feeling of escape”
Your writing is so beautiful. Good work <3
Perfect timing! I haven’t been writing recently because I have been really down, just came back to the site today and this beautiful comment was waiting to encourage me to get back into it, so thank you! 🦋🌷
Thank you for giving me the pleasure to read your beautiful work. I too am struggling the past many months, and sadly I don’t write so much, I reform some of my old poems. Anyway, I wish you the best, and keep in mind that you are not alone, I mean it. I try to say the same thing to myself too. haha